Spotlighting Commenters #64

Jun 19, 201511 min read

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Published: Jun 19, 2015

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Spotlight Commenters

^{These commenters are determined by you through Nominations (read below for more information). Each month, we will be selecting a couple of amazing commenters based on the comments we have seen in our gallery submissions and elsewhere on DeviantArt. Anyone on DeviantArt is applicable for this feature!}

, ContraSprite, Deviant
Commented on Way Farer -Wip- by YumisaR.

"To start out, I wanted to point out how nice your background is! I really love the interesting sky and how you are using it to bring all of your colors together in this picture. :] I also really like the textures that are beginning to appear, particularly those in the hair and the feathers on the helmet! La la la la The feathers have some interesting light on them that definitely catches my eye and makes them interesting to look at. The direction of the light looks like it is coming from the sunset behind, which is very nice. I would love to see that lighting chose continued on the rest of the character. :] As you finish this piece, it would be really nice to see some highlighted edges on her helmet, shoulder, arm, and maybe even a little on her hair. :] Having said that, I can see that the main light source is coming from in front of her (which is also nice) and I'd love to see that made stronger in some places as well. I don't know how shiny you want her helmet to be in the end, but I think some bright highlights from the main light source would really add to that too. [...]"

Here is a selection of art created by ContraSprite.
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, MjaxMajoran, General Artist, Hobbyist
Commented on 'Stars and Spies' Script S1E1 1/2 (Draft 1) by Reach4Succes1995.

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"Your dialogue is amazingly smooth, not at all uncommon to be seen in a novel rather than a script but it's g.. conversations seem to flow well, and the characters are relatable. *right down to the girlfriend thing, would you believe that same thing happened to me as a kid?* if I have one criticism... it's the toned down reaction from annabel and marsha when tessa puts out her star, the sorta just gasp and then act as if this revelation is nothing... in contrast to how annabel acted to marsha revealing hers this is kinda odd wouldn't ya think?

The story: still hooking me in with this concept, I kinda want to make theories which usually only happens when I'm super invested in an episodic storyline.... which I suppose I am, I have no problems with it really, It's great all around!. [...]"

Here is a selection of art created by MjaxMajoran.

Mature Content

Come Back Ballad.Come back my friend
I'll make it okay
we reached a dead end
but I only wish to play
Come back my mother
Do not run astray
It'll soon be over
Sleep deep in the bay
Come back my Daddy
You left me this this way
did you leave for more family
I promise they won't stay
This is my ballad, a song just for you
beware of the monster that you have grew
I'm growing tired of the chase now
it's time for thou to take your bow
Come back my bullies
those things that you say
I can make pain too you will see
beware of the revenge, I will make you pay
Come back my lost loves
I brought a bouquet
I need you here
why in your eyes do I see fear and fray
Come back my past self
Please do not any longer delay
please put this darkness away on the shelf
something is wrong, we cannot disobey
This is my ballad, a song just for you
beware of the monster that you have grew
It cannot be stopped and it hurts so much
You did this, I'm trapped in his clutch
Come little Mjax
I'm nicer a lot nicer than they
Do not fear me j The Tardis Me and You (Jaxed Up Lyrics Parody) A Doctor Who Parody By Mjax Majoran
Original Song by The Vengaboys: Boom Boom Boom Boom
[Lyrics]
Whoa oh whoa oh
Whoa oh whoa oh
Traveling in Space and Time
Whoa oh whoa oh
Whoa oh whoa oh
Whoa oh whoa oh
Whoa oh whoa oh
If you're all bored and you need a friend
Someone to make you remember beauty
Just come along and
Hop in my box
I'll be your Doctor For life
[Pre-chorus:]
Whoa oh whoa oh
This is what were gonna do
Whoa oh whoa oh
Let's travel round the sun
Whoa oh whoa oh
Through the skies just me and you
Whoa oh whoa oh
[Chorus:]
Zoom Zoom Zoom Zoom
I want you to travel with you
Let's spend some times together
Fight the daleks and cybermen
Zoom Zoom Zoom Zoom
I wanna Zoom Zoom
Let's travel the stars together
The Tardis, Me and You!
Whoa oh whoa oh
Using a Sonic Screwdriver it's Fun!
Whoa oh whoa oh
the Doctor is back in time!
[Pre-chorus]
Whoa oh whoa oh
Silurians and Atraxi too!
Whoa oh whoa oh
We're gonna have some fun
Whoa oh whoa oh
Through the
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, Yetinia, Deviant
Commented on Death at the Hands of Petals by TheDviousOne.

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"Now I realize this piece is a little over two years old and your art has improved and changed since. So to make this piece more constructive and relevant, I will make reference to more recent pieces in your galleries to draw attention to what has improved or changed over the course of two years and what could probably use more work. As we improve, it's also important to keep in mind the things we considered fine at one time and left alone, but should probably not neglect improving as we strive to improve as whole.

As for this image itself your intention was conveyed clearly with the juxtaposition of the knife and the color of the flowers matching the streak of red blood blooming from this victim's chest. Compositionally the piece is centered but keeps interested with the triad of flowers encircling them. It's a simple piece that does not by any means over stay its welcome and reads rather like a splash page of a comic, with just enough detail to distinguish form. The blood pouring onto the leaves of the flowers intermingles fantasy with the imminent morbid reality effectively. In addition, the white light blurring of the edges to signify both a deceptively cheery atmosphere as well as a reference to the 'light at the end of the tunnel' people often report in near death experiences, was a nice touch. [...]"

Here is a selection of art created by Yetinia.

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