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im-who.deviantart.com/art/Chai… ~ Good angle? Overall Feedback

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hurtingtobeawriter.deviantart.… ~ What did you think of the poem overall? Was it too dark or did the emotion fit the topic? Does the title seem to fit the work? If not, do you have a different suggestion? Is the word choice fitting? Are there spots where the word choice is poor? Are there other words I could use in spots where it doesn't flow as well?
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:iconrenacido:
Renacido Featured By Owner May 7, 2014  Professional General Artist
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I'm trying to figure out how to push this character design further since I plan on revising her in the near future. I know there are areas I haven't pushed as far as possible. I'm seeking critique on the design and not so much her context story. :)

- Thank youuu
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:icon3wyl:
3wyl Featured By Owner May 11, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Added, thanks!

To our most recent one, I mean: projectcomment.deviantart.com/…
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MelikeBAt Featured By Owner Feb 2, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
The World Is Mad Enough by MelikeBAt
I really do not know what I do right what I do wrong in my manipulations. I do not have any technical knowledge, and I just follow instincts and follow the way how it feels right to me. But it is not enough of course. I want to know what could I do better in the piece above; what are wrong things about it in the first place. You can be destructive too. :)
I just want to learn my "faults"; because it is hard for me to see them. Plus no one can be more hard on me than I do.

Thanks in advance.
:heart:
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:icon3wyl:
3wyl Featured By Owner Feb 2, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
I've added this to our most recent one which you can find here: fav.me/d747pnt
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:iconmelikebat:
MelikeBAt Featured By Owner Feb 2, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Thank you!
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:iconf0xies:
F0XIES Featured By Owner Jan 25, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
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Overall feedback is appreciated, but is it a good angle?
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:icon3wyl:
3wyl Featured By Owner Jan 29, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Added, thanks!
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:iconandreareno:
andreareno Featured By Owner Jan 21, 2014  Hobbyist Photographer
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General feedback  and constructive critics. Thanks you:).
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:icon3wyl:
3wyl Featured By Owner Jan 24, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Added, thanks!
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:iconbittersweetflames:
bittersweetflames Featured By Owner Jan 17, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
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--- just overall feedback, really. <3 hehe. Thank you!
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:icon3wyl:
3wyl Featured By Owner Jan 24, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Added, thanks!
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:icontryskacik:
Tryskacik Featured By Owner Jan 16, 2014
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Hello, I'd love to hear some crit on this drawing if you can help. is there any wrong in the proportions, uneven shading, if it's not looking stiff and if it does then where,  how does it make you feel when you have a look at it? how could I make it better? thanks a lot!
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:icon3wyl:
3wyl Featured By Owner Jan 17, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Added, thanks!
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:iconbernuviel:
Bernuviel Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2014  Student Digital Artist
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What about the anatomy can be improved?
How can I make the clothes look more realistic and 3D? Where do I have to put folds?
How can I improve the background/composition of the picture?
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:icon3wyl:
3wyl Featured By Owner Jan 15, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Added, thanks. :)
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HurtingToBeAWriter Featured By Owner Jan 11, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
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What did you think of the poem overall?

Was it too dark or did the emotion fit the topic?

Does the title seem to fit the work? If not, do you have a different suggestion?

Is the word choice fitting? Are there spots where the word choice is poor? Are there other words I could use in spots where it doesn't flow as well?
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:icon3wyl:
3wyl Featured By Owner Jan 15, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Added, thanks. :)
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:iconhurtingtobeawriter:
HurtingToBeAWriter Featured By Owner Jan 15, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you :)
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:iconqihah:
Qihah Featured By Owner Jan 8, 2014
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How's the anatomy and body posture?
Do I need more shading?
Can I make a commission out of my current art skills? If yes, can you price it for me?

Thank you.
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:icon3wyl:
3wyl Featured By Owner Jan 15, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Added, thanks. :)
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:iconqihah:
Qihah Featured By Owner Jan 15, 2014
Thank you too! :hug:
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yuukipink Featured By Owner Jan 3, 2014  Professional Digital Artist
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- Is this creature appealing / interesting to you? 
- What do you like about it?
- What don't you like about it? 
- If I were selling commissions based off this creature would you buy one? 
- If you saw a cute bookmark, charm, necklace, keychain with this character on it in a store, would you consider buying it? 
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:icon3wyl:
3wyl Featured By Owner Jan 6, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Added, thanks!
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:iconarxe-the-bard:
Arxe-the-Bard Featured By Owner Jan 3, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
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I'm still working on developing my writing style, so feedback on wording and all is appreciated. 

Some questions I'd appreciate some answers for:

Do you feel uncomfortably lost as you read through? 

Are interested enough from the introduction to keep reading?




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:icon3wyl:
3wyl Featured By Owner Jan 6, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Added, thanks!
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:iconarxe-the-bard:
Arxe-the-Bard Featured By Owner Jan 6, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
no, thank you :D
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:iconsalty-cookie:
Salty-Cookie Featured By Owner Jan 3, 2014  Student Digital Artist
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How can I improve the background?
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:icon3wyl:
3wyl Featured By Owner Jan 6, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Added, thanks!
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:iconsalty-cookie:
Salty-Cookie Featured By Owner Jan 6, 2014  Student Digital Artist
NP
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:iconhexacun:
Hexacun Featured By Owner Dec 31, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Lilly H  ... 

Constructive Criticism and/or overall feedback :)  
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:icon3wyl:
3wyl Featured By Owner Jan 2, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Added, thanks!
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:iconhexacun:
Hexacun Featured By Owner Dec 31, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
It's a traditional art ._. 
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:iconfirecrackerlady:
FirecrackerLady Featured By Owner Dec 30, 2013  Student General Artist
Hey ladies and gents, I would really appreciate feedback on my poem, "Closing The Book And Lighting It On Fire"  Thank you all

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:icon3wyl:
3wyl Featured By Owner Dec 31, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Added, thanks!
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:iconvc667:
vc667 Featured By Owner Dec 30, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Okey then :la: Here is one vc667.deviantart.com/art/Good-… I wanted an opinion of how you think of him? Please?
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:icon3wyl:
3wyl Featured By Owner Dec 31, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Added, thanks!
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:iconvc667:
vc667 Featured By Owner Dec 31, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Your welcome :)
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:iconcookie-rose:
Cookie-rose Featured By Owner Dec 23, 2013  Student General Artist
 cookie-rose.deviantart.com/art…

I would like your opinion on this page of my comic. Feedback/criticism is appreciated. What works, what doesn't, etc.
Thanks. 
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:icon3wyl:
3wyl Featured By Owner Dec 25, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Added, thanks!
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:iconzembelle:
zembelle Featured By Owner Dec 9, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
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I'd like to know your interpretation of this, or what you think it's about. And also what you think of the structure and the imagery. Please :meow: I've had writer's block for a long, long time and this is the first thing I've uploaded in over a year so I'm quite nervous about it :P
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:icon3wyl:
3wyl Featured By Owner Dec 11, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I'll add that, thanks!
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:iconmnikelenko:
MNikelenko Featured By Owner Nov 23, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
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thanks you
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:icon3wyl:
3wyl Featured By Owner Nov 24, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Added, thanks!
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:iconffrankies:
ffrankies Featured By Owner Nov 12, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
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I'd like some feedback on the dialogue and plot of the story - was it interesting and realistic enough? What could I have done to make it more so? Is there anything in particular that I did well or poorly?
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:icon3wyl:
3wyl Featured By Owner Nov 15, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Added, thanks!
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:iconffrankies:
ffrankies Featured By Owner Nov 15, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you :)
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:iconmiraiokami:
MiraiOkami Featured By Owner Nov 9, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist

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~How can I improve my background (maybe some grass-making tips)?

~Does the fur look very bad or may it be? What should I change?

~Some advice about shading?

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:icon3wyl:
3wyl Featured By Owner Nov 9, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Added, thanks!
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howlingwolf142 Featured By Owner Nov 9, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
Hello there.

I was wondering if I could get some advice on a drawing I had made in hopes that I can improve on a possible resketch in the future!

howlingwolf142.deviantart.com/art/I-Promise-You-Revenge-393665995   

I'm not sure if that one is a blue link, but that is the correct URL. I could use some advice about how I can make this piece...better. Depth and detailing issues nonetheless. If anybody can give me a little feedback, I would appreciate it!
 
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:icon3wyl:
3wyl Featured By Owner Nov 9, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Added, thanks!
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