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Digital Art
[link] ~ How can I improve on the background? Any tips or tricks?
Photography
[link] ~ Any tips on how to get the best from Macro lens'?
Traditional Art
[link] ~ What should I do to improve the shading? Flaws?
Fan Art
[link] ~ wat should I do to improve da shading?
[link] ~ What should be improved - mainly in the face part? Thoughts on the lighting and shading? Flaws?
Prose
[link] ~ The tone/narration of the piece - does this work? Should it be changed/tweeked? Do I just the right narrative perspective?
The characters - are the characters strong characters/are they believable?
Language - I know i'm one of those writers that don't use tons of sophisticated language and heaps of detail, but should I?
What's your favourite part of the piece? This could be a line/paragraph/concept, whatever.
What's the part you think I should improve/lose the most?







Criticism & opinions welcome.
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I would like to know what I could do to improve my drawing technique ? And also for the gun, because it is the first time I draw one >.< If you notice anything else that could be improved or deleted, I would trully appreciate if you helped me out. c:
What should I do to improve the shading? Flaws?
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Any tips on how to get the best from Macro lens'?
How can I improve on the background? Any tips or tricks?
What should be improved - mainly in the face part? Thoughts on the lighting and shading? Flaws?