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September 1, 2012
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Digital Art
[link] ~ How can I improve on the background? Any tips or tricks?

Photography
[link] ~ Any tips on how to get the best from Macro lens'?

Traditional Art
[link] ~ What should I do to improve the shading? Flaws?

Fan Art
[link] ~ wat should I do to improve da shading?

[link] ~ What should be improved - mainly in the face part? Thoughts on the lighting and shading? Flaws?

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[link] ~ The tone/narration of the piece - does this work? Should it be changed/tweeked? Do I just the right narrative perspective?
The characters - are the characters strong characters/are they believable?
Language - I know i'm one of those writers that don't use tons of sophisticated language and heaps of detail, but should I?
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~AzureGriffin 10 hours ago  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Hello people ! :wave:
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I would like to know what I could do to improve my drawing technique ? And also for the gun, because it is the first time I draw one >.< If you notice anything else that could be improved or deleted, I would trully appreciate if you helped me out. c:
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~Baccano6 May 13, 2013  New member Student
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What should I do to improve the shading? Flaws?
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^3wyl 3 days ago  Hobbyist Photographer
Added, thanks!
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Mood: Zest *Clerdy May 12, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
Got a macro lens today and took this:

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Any tips on how to get the best from Macro lens'?
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^3wyl 3 days ago  Hobbyist Photographer
Added, thanks!
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*Clerdy May 12, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
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~Rukato57 May 11, 2013  Student General Artist
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How can I improve on the background? Any tips or tricks?
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^3wyl 3 days ago  Hobbyist Photographer
Added, thanks!
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~YuSuzukei May 4, 2013  Student General Artist
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What should be improved - mainly in the face part? Thoughts on the lighting and shading? Flaws?
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