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In order to support those efforts, we encourage dedicated users to give comments too. For those who are critics, artists, or just helpful in the community, we now offer something in return for all that you do - be it helping the participants of ProjectComment, or the group itself!
This weekly article focuses on the amazing deviants in the DeviantArt community, who have given fantastic comments, through excerpts of those comments, artwork by the deviants themselves, and much more! Your support in the article would be much appreciated.
, Phisisturae, Writer, Student
Commented on I hope you have sunny days by kirackerjack.
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"I like this over all - letters are a pretty unique way of writing and this is a refreshing read from poetry and prose, a collection of letters would be very interesting indeed! But that's a tangent, here's a critique: over all, its good, but as you might have feared its quite clichéd from what I can see I am afraid. Lots of weather imagery, lots of somewhat predictable metaphors (a few gems though! I like the driftwood and shell comparisons). You could improve on this by axing off a few of the images that go overboard or reviewing what makes them same-y, and how you could commincate your emotions more specifically.[...]"
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, Maxyall, General Artist, Hobbyist
Commented on -Hime-Sama: Yurusanai - by Yukiko-Kun.
"Colorful, lively, and despite having different colors everywhere, the piece looks clean and neat, like vector art! My favorite part of him (her?) is the hair. This pics allure me somehow. It caught my eyes instantly while I scroll through submissions. Like the other guy said, this pics look fun. full of refreshing sight and the character expression brings it together very well. Although I think the background is abit overdone but it doesn't subtract much from the whole picture.[...]"
Here is a selection of art created by Maxyall.
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, RetSamys, General Artist, Hobbyist
Commented on fwoosh by K-0-I.
"There are a few comments below suggesting that you should put more details in the ground. I disagree, but I get why they would want that. While the horizon shouldn't be sharply distinguishable, some more difference between ground and sky wouldn't be a bad idea, especially on the left and right of the ground, not where it's fading out, but maybe some of the areas that seem to have the same colours as the darker clouds on the horizon. This will make the background more distinguishable from the foreground, I think, providing us with an even better feeling of depth than the lens distortion already does.</i>[...]"
Here is a selection of art created by RetSamys.
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We need nominations of deviants who you think should be featured! Send us a note with the subject "Nomination" and the following information:
The news feature occurs once every week and all nominations will be taken into account.
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3wyl, posting on behalf of ProjectComment
In order to support those efforts, we encourage dedicated users to give comments too. For those who are critics, artists, or just helpful in the community, we now offer something in return for all that you do - be it helping the participants of ProjectComment, or the group itself!
This weekly article focuses on the amazing deviants in the DeviantArt community, who have given fantastic comments, through excerpts of those comments, artwork by the deviants themselves, and much more! Your support in the article would be much appreciated.
Spotlight Commenters
These commenters are determined by you through Nominations (read below for more information). Each month, we will be selecting a couple of amazing commenters based on the comments we have seen in our gallery submissions and elsewhere on DeviantArt. Anyone on DeviantArt is applicable for this feature!, Phisisturae, Writer, Student
Commented on I hope you have sunny days by kirackerjack.
:thumb560837940:
"I like this over all - letters are a pretty unique way of writing and this is a refreshing read from poetry and prose, a collection of letters would be very interesting indeed! But that's a tangent, here's a critique: over all, its good, but as you might have feared its quite clichéd from what I can see I am afraid. Lots of weather imagery, lots of somewhat predictable metaphors (a few gems though! I like the driftwood and shell comparisons). You could improve on this by axing off a few of the images that go overboard or reviewing what makes them same-y, and how you could commincate your emotions more specifically.[...]"
Here is a selection of art created by Phisisturae.
62. Irregular Orbiti. Apogee
Make light -
cast it on your face like a spell.
You tell me things
- murmur and crackle.
You are another station
beyond the fuzz of this city
and science.
Appreciate roads
how far they run
and
what they touch.
Step into the firmament
- please
on steps of shade
and eyes
staring at the poor earth.
ii. Perigee
Walk with purpose
towards
anything.
A magnet has come to town.
Breathe on me -
turn to face your halo.
Shimmer.
Your arms on my back,
chest to chest,
yours on yours.
Watch the hands on the clock
stroke.
Frame pieces of me with your hands.
Times bend to you.
I'm slipping -
hold on.
Autumn BrevetteTrees
S e a s o n
Ground
HeightsWithin my ribs a mountain stands, peeks and
squints at the outside. He knows he fills the cracks
in me. I mourn the days when I could breathe.
Some grand view will crown the heights and one day
I will see.
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, Maxyall, General Artist, Hobbyist
Commented on -Hime-Sama: Yurusanai - by Yukiko-Kun.
"Colorful, lively, and despite having different colors everywhere, the piece looks clean and neat, like vector art! My favorite part of him (her?) is the hair. This pics allure me somehow. It caught my eyes instantly while I scroll through submissions. Like the other guy said, this pics look fun. full of refreshing sight and the character expression brings it together very well. Although I think the background is abit overdone but it doesn't subtract much from the whole picture.[...]"
Here is a selection of art created by Maxyall.
Have a browse of their Gallery!
, RetSamys, General Artist, Hobbyist
Commented on fwoosh by K-0-I.
"There are a few comments below suggesting that you should put more details in the ground. I disagree, but I get why they would want that. While the horizon shouldn't be sharply distinguishable, some more difference between ground and sky wouldn't be a bad idea, especially on the left and right of the ground, not where it's fading out, but maybe some of the areas that seem to have the same colours as the darker clouds on the horizon. This will make the background more distinguishable from the foreground, I think, providing us with an even better feeling of depth than the lens distortion already does.</i>[...]"
Here is a selection of art created by RetSamys.
Have a browse of their Gallery!
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- Name of Deviant
Links to the deviations they commented. (This is great way to give back to a user who has given you an exceptional comment!
The news feature occurs once every week and all nominations will be taken into account.
If your nomination isn't featured immediately, it may still be featured in a future news article!
3wyl, posting on behalf of ProjectComment
Magic Week - Reverse Caption
The power flowed into him, filling his lungs, spreading out in his blood like oxygen, and settling into the marrow of his bones. He felt himself smile in a way that he hadn't since he was a boy learning to cast his first spell. He had devoted decades to the study of magic, but now, now he was magic. A glow lit the trees around him. He couldn't be sure if it was the setting sun, or if the glow came from his own skin. A beetle crawled on the ground nearby, seemingly unconcerned with what it had just witnessed, but yet its movements were in time with his heartbeat. A bird in the sky flapped its wings to the same rhythm. A breeze plucked at his hair and clothes. He began to dance, slowly at first; he followed the wind, and the wind followed him. He moved faster, twirling and leaping, until even the fallen leaves were dancing around him. When he stopped, all was still. He smiled again, and raised his arms to the sky. The first stars were visible. He watched them for a long
Feature of Great Commenters: July
As a result of our Nominate a Commenter + Win 100 Points project, we will be announcing the winners of those 100 and bringing you features of our great commenters every month! Week of 13th - 27th June Congratulations @Frozen-Faeriefyre for winning 100 :points: ! Feature of Great Commenters! @Anukisima, @BeckyKidus, @bioniclop18, @DoubleDandE, @lightLast, @Sori-Eminia, @VonGrechii, @Ymrabelle Week of 27th June - 11th July Congratulations @Dragon-Beans for winning 100 :points: ! Feature of Great Commenters! @Anukisima, @DoubleDandE, @kmkibble75, @lovelyHanibal, @raichmann, @Sori-Eminia, @Souvillaine, @StephOBrien, @TheCrimsonSpark, @Ymrabelle If you would like the chance to win 100 :points: or be featured, nominate a commenter now!
Submit Freestyle + New Theme
Theme Submissions for This Week We accept 1 deviation a day to Theme! Theme: Toys, suggested by LDFranklin Theme Description: Photographs of objects that children play with. Starts: Sunday, August 2nd Ends: Sunday, August 9th Send in your submission >HERE< by suggesting it as a favourite. The best submissions will be added to the gallery! Weekly Feature Many thanks to LDFranklin for suggesting this week's theme! Check out their art now! Last Week's Theme Submissions: Reflective Theme Submissions Info for Next Time Theme: New, suggested by Coigach Theme Description: TBA Starts: Sunday, August 9th Ends: Sunday, August 16th Pending Themes Borders & Edges, suggested by AlejaOlch HDR, suggested by AlejandroCastillo Murky, suggested by Laerian Delicate, suggested by crestmultimeadia Open Landscapes, suggested by Lumimyrskydawn Odd, suggested by Abnormalion Street Art, suggested by jlxp Fluffy, suggested by AlejaOlch Nature in Cities
No Constructive Comments #61
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Thanks again for the feature, hope to be back and on dA in the next day or two, see you round