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ProjectComment is a Group that provides Guaranteed & Constructive comments for the DeviantArt community.
In order to support those efforts, we encourage dedicated users to give comments too. For those who are critics, artists, or just helpful in the community, we now offer something in return for all that you do - be it helping the participants of ProjectComment, or the group itself!
This weekly article focuses on the amazing deviants in the DeviantArt community, who have given fantastic comments, through excerpts of those comments, artwork by the deviants themselves, and much more! Your support in
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, SweatLoveBeer, Varied, Student
Commented on Bothered by RogueMudblood.
"I love how you portrayed Storm, as the great goddess she is, sneering at Jean hurting herself - which is also a great way to introduce a third party, very skillfully done! You introduced every one subtle, but so well enough in description that -as someone who knows the comics- you have no problem knowing who they are, even though you didn't even mention Jean Grey's name at all!
I liked the paragraphing, too, just the right amount of happening and text in each paragraph that the whole thing was very easy and fluidly to read! And the formatting with the flashbacks in italics is great, too!
My favourite part was by far the end - with the most powerful sentence as one of the last, it really leaves you with a tingling, scared, but excited feeling - which is awesome and so skillfully done! Even that you sooth our fear of Ororo by telling us that her heart is, indeed, tormented, leaving us to pity her for a little more, is very awesome.[...]"
Here is a selection of art created by SweatLoveBeer.
:thumb513675081: :thumb512604628: :thumb513949215:
Have a browse of their Gallery!
, isthisthingstillon, Professional Artist
Commented on Red Lipstick by XRlS
"The palette in this piece is very organic, yet also very rich. The very subtle colour temperature contrasts - especially the warm red lipstick against the crimson lips, and the two-hue blue on the curtain highs/shadows (if my eyes aren't deceiving me) - make the image take on a wonderful visual depth while not distracting with chroma-clutter. I'm also loving the detail on the lips, the back shoulder shadow, and the almost plastic way the hair is painted. It looks like actual glossed curly hair, not the spaghetti/flat thing most people would have going on up there. The eyes are superbly emotive, and the colour they have is brilliant, clear, and really stands out since the only similar hue I'm seeing is an undertone in the hair.[...]"
Here is a selection of art created by isthisthingstillon.
Have a browse of their Gallery!
, Mourkhayn, Traditional Art, Hobbyist
Commented on A Glimmer of Hope by Schokopir.
"I think you did a great job of creating a focal point on the flower. The darkened background and vignetting lend a lot weight to the title of this piece. It really feels like that flower is struggling to extract itself from that darkness!
I think you could make this image even better by cropping it to change the composition. Right now, the flower is pretty much dead in the center and the stalk almost perfectly aligned with the diagonal of the image. The other flowers and stalks in the background break the symmetry a bit, but the composition still feels somewhat stiff to me.
A good way to avoid that is to think in terms of negative space when you take the shot: don't focus only on the subject (flower and stalk) but also how you can use the subject to "cut" varied negative shapes in the background. [...]"
Here is a selection of art created by Mourkhayn.
Have a browse of their Gallery!
:thumb460365186:
If you want to be in for the chance of being featured, feel free to submit to this folder!
We need nominations of deviants who you think should be featured! Send us a note with the subject "Nomination" and the following information:
You can suggest anyone and everyone (except yourself 
) at any time and include as many nominations as you want in one note.
The news feature occurs once every week and all nominations will be taken into account.
If your nomination isn't featured immediately, it may still be featured in a future news article!
3wyl, posting on behalf of ProjectComment
In order to support those efforts, we encourage dedicated users to give comments too. For those who are critics, artists, or just helpful in the community, we now offer something in return for all that you do - be it helping the participants of ProjectComment, or the group itself!
This weekly article focuses on the amazing deviants in the DeviantArt community, who have given fantastic comments, through excerpts of those comments, artwork by the deviants themselves, and much more! Your support in
the article would be much appreciated. Spotlight Commenters
These commenters are determined by you through Nominations (read below for more information). Each month, we will be selecting a couple of amazing commenters based on the comments we have seen in our gallery submissions and elsewhere on deviantART. Anyone on deviantART is applicable for this feature!, SweatLoveBeer, Varied, StudentCommented on Bothered by RogueMudblood.
BotheredDisclaimer: I do not own the X-Men. I make no profit from this work of fiction.
This is based in the comics universe, not the films. It is, however, a bit AU.
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His arm was around her shoulders, her head laying on him as she leaned into his larger frame. Her left side rose with her breath, falling as she exhaled in a long, soft sigh. Red hair falling in waves down to the middle of her back looked far too elegant for the simple picnic outing. They brushed along the middle slat of the bench the couple sat on as the breeze began to pick up, several strands getting caught in the nicks in the wood. As the woman leaned forward to gather her hair together, the pieces that had been trapped ripped and snapped, pulling the skin of her tender scalp mercilessly as they were quickly separated from her.
Their observer smiled, a dark, malevolent grin that gave her an air of being the terrifying goddess she had once been called. Her mood had abruptly changed
"I love how you portrayed Storm, as the great goddess she is, sneering at Jean hurting herself - which is also a great way to introduce a third party, very skillfully done! You introduced every one subtle, but so well enough in description that -as someone who knows the comics- you have no problem knowing who they are, even though you didn't even mention Jean Grey's name at all!
I liked the paragraphing, too, just the right amount of happening and text in each paragraph that the whole thing was very easy and fluidly to read! And the formatting with the flashbacks in italics is great, too!
My favourite part was by far the end - with the most powerful sentence as one of the last, it really leaves you with a tingling, scared, but excited feeling - which is awesome and so skillfully done! Even that you sooth our fear of Ororo by telling us that her heart is, indeed, tormented, leaving us to pity her for a little more, is very awesome.[...]"
Here is a selection of art created by SweatLoveBeer.
:thumb513675081: :thumb512604628: :thumb513949215:
Have a browse of their Gallery!
, isthisthingstillon, Professional ArtistCommented on Red Lipstick by XRlS
"The palette in this piece is very organic, yet also very rich. The very subtle colour temperature contrasts - especially the warm red lipstick against the crimson lips, and the two-hue blue on the curtain highs/shadows (if my eyes aren't deceiving me) - make the image take on a wonderful visual depth while not distracting with chroma-clutter. I'm also loving the detail on the lips, the back shoulder shadow, and the almost plastic way the hair is painted. It looks like actual glossed curly hair, not the spaghetti/flat thing most people would have going on up there. The eyes are superbly emotive, and the colour they have is brilliant, clear, and really stands out since the only similar hue I'm seeing is an undertone in the hair.[...]"
Here is a selection of art created by isthisthingstillon.
Have a browse of their Gallery!
, Mourkhayn, Traditional Art, HobbyistCommented on A Glimmer of Hope by Schokopir.
"I think you did a great job of creating a focal point on the flower. The darkened background and vignetting lend a lot weight to the title of this piece. It really feels like that flower is struggling to extract itself from that darkness!
I think you could make this image even better by cropping it to change the composition. Right now, the flower is pretty much dead in the center and the stalk almost perfectly aligned with the diagonal of the image. The other flowers and stalks in the background break the symmetry a bit, but the composition still feels somewhat stiff to me.
A good way to avoid that is to think in terms of negative space when you take the shot: don't focus only on the subject (flower and stalk) but also how you can use the subject to "cut" varied negative shapes in the background. [...]"
Here is a selection of art created by Mourkhayn.
Have a browse of their Gallery!
Do you know of a potential Spotlight Commenter? If so, we take nominations. Feel free to note ProjectComment!
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Consider commenting on one or more of the below! :thumb460365186:
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How To Nominate
We need nominations of deviants who you think should be featured! Send us a note with the subject "Nomination" and the following information:
Name of Deviant Links to the deviations they commented. (This is great way to give back to a user who has given you an exceptional comment! You can suggest anyone and everyone (except yourself ) at any time and include as many nominations as you want in one note. The news feature occurs once every week and all nominations will be taken into account. If your nomination isn't featured immediately, it may still be featured in a future news article!3wyl, posting on behalf of ProjectComment
Magic Week - Reverse Caption
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Feature of Great Commenters: July
As a result of our Nominate a Commenter + Win 100 Points project, we will be announcing the winners of those 100 and bringing you features of our great commenters every month! Week of 13th - 27th June Congratulations @Frozen-Faeriefyre for winning 100 :points: ! Feature of Great Commenters! @Anukisima, @BeckyKidus, @bioniclop18, @DoubleDandE, @lightLast, @Sori-Eminia, @VonGrechii, @Ymrabelle Week of 27th June - 11th July Congratulations @Dragon-Beans for winning 100 :points: ! Feature of Great Commenters! @Anukisima, @DoubleDandE, @kmkibble75, @lovelyHanibal, @raichmann, @Sori-Eminia, @Souvillaine, @StephOBrien, @TheCrimsonSpark, @Ymrabelle If you would like the chance to win 100 :points: or be featured, nominate a commenter now!
Submit Freestyle + New Theme
Theme Submissions for This Week We accept 1 deviation a day to Theme! Theme: Toys, suggested by LDFranklin Theme Description: Photographs of objects that children play with. Starts: Sunday, August 2nd Ends: Sunday, August 9th Send in your submission >HERE< by suggesting it as a favourite. The best submissions will be added to the gallery! Weekly Feature Many thanks to LDFranklin for suggesting this week's theme! Check out their art now! Last Week's Theme Submissions: Reflective Theme Submissions Info for Next Time Theme: New, suggested by Coigach Theme Description: TBA Starts: Sunday, August 9th Ends: Sunday, August 16th Pending Themes Borders & Edges, suggested by AlejaOlch HDR, suggested by AlejandroCastillo Murky, suggested by Laerian Delicate, suggested by crestmultimeadia Open Landscapes, suggested by Lumimyrskydawn Odd, suggested by Abnormalion Street Art, suggested by jlxp Fluffy, suggested by AlejaOlch Nature in Cities
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