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I will give you my
hand in battle. Would you give
me yours to save me?
hand in battle. Would you give
me yours to save me?
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...you would like to be treated yourself.
I wrote this a while ago, but never found the right time to submit.
I think I've found the right time now.
Gandhi said "An eye for an eye makes the whole world blind"
Is it true?
Sometimes I feel so tired. Is everything worth it in the end? Is everyone just taking advantage?
If I was on the receiving end instead, would anyone...
Questions, questions...
I wrote this a while ago, but never found the right time to submit.
I think I've found the right time now.
Gandhi said "An eye for an eye makes the whole world blind"
Is it true?
Sometimes I feel so tired. Is everything worth it in the end? Is everyone just taking advantage?
If I was on the receiving end instead, would anyone...
Questions, questions...
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Very profound haiku. It really speaks of the better side of human nature and how we must stick by our fellow men in some cases. I think it's important and beneficial for us to remember all of us are mere mortals at the end of the day and if we wished to be respect and love we must treat others in the same way. Sometimes it can be such a difficult task to achieve, but overall it's a reward to help others when they're in dire straights. I really enjoyed this and what you said in this poem makes sense. Very well done
Very profound haiku. It really speaks of the better side of human nature and how we must stick by our fellow men in some cases. I think it's important and beneficial for us to remember all of us are mere mortals at the end of the day and if we wished to be respect and love we must treat others in the same way. Sometimes it can be such a difficult task to achieve, but overall it's a reward to help others when they're in dire straights. I really enjoyed this and what you said in this poem makes sense. Very well done