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                                                          if I was a toy
                                                           I would let
                                                          You pick Me

             p     and     d
          u                       o                     p     and     d
                                       w            u                        o
                                            n                                      w                p     and     d
                                                                                         n         u                        o                         
                                                                                                                                 w
                                                                                                                                      n
  
                                                       I would be inanimate


                                                                [Silent]


                                                                  No
                                                      will; thought; feeling;


My seams would rip
My colours would fade
My features undistinguished

                                                                                     … (and I would do these things)

                                                            if I was a toy.
©2009 =3wyl
:icon3wyl:

Author's Comments

I think my style of poetry lies within Human Nature -> Open i.e Experimentalism. I really have a lot of fun messing words around. xD

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:icone-shark47:
Indeed you do. Poetry in motion...

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I can't be everything to everyone. To thy own self be true.
-Thea Vidale

Dare to be the Dreamer

One day: ^E-Shark47
:iconmadameanonyme:
I am loving it!
The rhythm and technique is amazing

structure is just too cool my friend :D

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People have told me you're a right player , but i'd still do anything to be your favourite game </3
:iconsixcookies:
I love it. It' so......expressive.
I had to read it twice, I loved it so much. Keep up the good work!

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"You're welcome to believe that the world is a nice, logical, rational, safe place... You'll be wrong, but that hasn't stopped anyone else who thinks the same way."
:iconkumaccio:
You wont do anything as you wont have any will neither thoughts.
Maybe just exist, floating in the sea of your master wills.

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Fly as high as the sun.
:iconcatspupil:
Interesting; I have no idea how to do the techniques you do. Have you ever read 'the swan'? It's shaped like a swan in profile and its shadow. It's clever. Performative while remaining on the page.

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Usque adeo ne
Scire tuum nihil est, nisi te scire hoc sciat alter?
:iconnamed-laika:
An elephant : D ?!

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Thank-you (:
:iconglass-sword:
I like this, very cool and unique. :)

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"Oh my God! ...I left my penis at the apple factory!"
:icon3wyl:
An elephant?! O.o

For what?

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:icon3wyl:
Thanks for the comment. :)

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